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		<title>Passives are Peaceful, not Limp</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[In my latest article on the ATA Chronicle, the flagship publication of the American Translators Association, I explore passive voice. The title of the article is &#8220;Passive Voices Peace: Reconsidering the Ban on the Passive Voice in Your Writing.&#8221; Just yesterday, I experienced how relevant this is when I had to stop a writing coach [&#8230;]]]></description>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">In my latest article on the ATA Chronicle, the flagship publication of the American Translators Association, I explore passive voice. The title of the article is &#8220;Passive Voices Peace: Reconsidering the Ban on the Passive Voice in Your Writing.&#8221; Just yesterday, I experienced how relevant this is when I had to stop a writing coach in their tracks for propagating the poor advice that passive should be replaced by active voice to make the writing more vivid.</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">We all know that &#8220;mistakes were made&#8221; is an infelicitous phrase, but hiding the agent is not at all all the passive is good for. The advice I mentioned shows exactly why the passive is powerful. The author wrote: &#8220;I was given the news that I had stage 4 cancer.&#8221; The coach suggested: &#8220;Doctors gave me the news that&#8230; or better yet, Doctor so and so gave me the news that&#8230;&#8221; No! Who cares which doctor! (No disrespect to medical professionals dishing out the news and caring for the patients.) The patient&#8211;quite literally&#8211;is at the center of this story! That&#8217;s one of the uses of the passive: to front the theme of a transitive event and push the damn agent to the side. In a culture obsessed with agency, it does seem like a strange idea. But, as philosopher Julia Kristeva explained, the passive gives voice to the disenfranchised. I&#8217;d add it gives voice to those on the receiving end, whether exploited or exalted.</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">Another use of the passive is to lighten the processing effort of a reader when an agent requires a lengthy explanation, as in this partial summary of This Is Us (yes, I watch it): &#8220;The baby, Jack told his wife, had been brought to the hospital by a fireman, who had been dissuaded from ad[ting the child himself.&#8221;</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">Perhaps the more playful use of the passive is to shine light on the damn subject by introducing it last. I love this example, which I borrowed from a Twitter post: &#8220;Whole Foods, who packs a month’s supply of food in a paper bag, was bought by Amazon, who ships a paper clip in a refrigerator box.&#8221; Tell me the truth, it wouldn&#8217;t have had the same effect if Amazon was the subject of that sentence, right?</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">One last nerdy point for those grammar lovers out there: the passive creates symmetry between transitive and intransitive verbs. Intransitive verbs can have agents as subjects, as in &#8220;The storm roared on.&#8221; Or they can have themes as subjects (which ordinarily function as objects of transitive sentences), as in &#8220;The city collapsed.&#8221; So, for transitive verbs, we can do the same thing by inverting the syntactic order of agent and theme in active and passive voice, as in &#8220;The storm destroyed the city&#8221; and &#8220;The city was destroyed by the storm.&#8221;</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva, sans-serif;">Think about a story where you are questioning city officials for infrastructure maintenance: &#8220;The city was destroyed by the storm&#8221; might be your choice. Now, if you are writing about climate change, &#8220;The storm destroyed the city&#8221; may serve you better. Active versus passive voice is simply a tool to align the topic of your sentence with the topic of your message. Use it, don&#8217;t let it be misunderstood!</span></p>
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